gabby char.

[piegirl]

Name: firefur
Age: 27 moons
Alignment:ne
Clan: fire
Rank: warrior
Looks like: www.apurrfectfeline.org/Ginger_Cat.jpg and eyes that look like fire with long sharp claws
Personality: can be protective and a little too nice too her clan and is very trustworthy and strong, when shes mad she could nock down everything in sight, so some times its good to give her what she whats
Favorite Saying: "oh great, here we go again" or "Don't come any closer or I'll prownse"
Other: she doesn't laugh often

Your character has been denined for the following reasons:
NG=Pure Good and is one of the ahrdest alignments to play, next to TN. Your character does not sound like NG, please edit. Fire Clan cats may not be and Good Alignment.

[piegirl]

Name: Gash
Age: 20 moons
Alignment: ce
Clan: loner
Rank: N/a
Looks like: looks alot like tigerstar but with black at the tip of her tail, and a gash over her face hense her name and has a caller on her neck.
Personality: i'f she had a chouse she'ed kill every single cat, but her mother is in windclan so she's helps them the most.
Favorite Saying: "I'M NOT KITTYPET SCUM!"
Other: she was a kittypet till she ran away now she only wants is to show the clans that she's not a kittypet any more and she thinks a fight is the only way to do so.

You Character was denined for the following reasons:
TN is the hardest alignment to play, your character must be able to lean ether way without second thought. You character sounds more CE then TN. Learn how to use commas.